The craving
Gelatin
Sack in
Bit-ween
The legs,
Forms fluid wet thoughts
Surrender the snake flesh
In search of the dark purse
Beneath the salty forests
“Oh! sugar pie,
Come! Dance
The dance of death
Between your legs
Let’s stain the beds”
Born to suffer
And surrender
Yet she refuses,
They wonder!
“Come now sugar
Surrender to our guilt
We are the mob
From despair’s pit”
Held her wrist
Put a gun under
Yet she refuses
They wonder!
That pain.
The white sheet.
Touched and torn.
Jaws of the moon,
Jabbing at the ivory.
Sweet sugar melted
Screaming; rising tide
Blood moon pelted
With lust as its guide
We need to learn;
This Night!!
We Should…!!
We Must…!!
Gelatin
Sack in
Bit-ween
The legs,
Forms fluid wet thoughts
Surrender the snake flesh
In search of the dark purse
Beneath the salty forests
“Oh! sugar pie,
Come! Dance
The dance of death
Between your legs
Let’s stain the beds”
Born to suffer
And surrender
Yet she refuses,
They wonder!
“Come now sugar
Surrender to our guilt
We are the mob
From despair’s pit”
Held her wrist
Put a gun under
Yet she refuses
They wonder!
That pain.
The white sheet.
Touched and torn.
Jaws of the moon,
Jabbing at the ivory.
Sweet sugar melted
Screaming; rising tide
Blood moon pelted
With lust as its guide
We need to learn;
This Night!!
We Should…!!
We Must…!!
- Ripples Of Collections Of those Things
12 comments:
the picture, if, is the essence of the poetry....then sort of brought tears in me.....without the picture, i might have smiled..!!!
why would you smile, if there was no photo? i believe its still not something that you can call positive or right..its force...its rape...its everything that any human with a moral conscience will despise!! hehehhe..how come you would have smiled?
when i read the post in the Reader.....there was no picture....!! it seemed like a act of passion, in the madness of lust... with love lurking beneath somewhere...!!!
when i actually opened u blog.....then i saw the picture...then the brutality of the rape dawned on me.....and the smile disappeared...!
hahahaha..awite...i think you didnt notice the 'her' and 'we' and 'they' and 'mob'...you knw..its not like social love..hehhehe ;p...
yes....i completely missed out on the "We are the mob From despair’s pit"....that should have gone ring ring the danger bell...!!
the tears go on..!!!
when the bells toll
then the tears roll...
hehehe...thanks though..thts the sugar klash fr this week..havent sent it as yet...have you put up the clash on your blog?
yes i did......the Red Ronin has done it too....after i reminded him last evening... but it created an OHT in my tiny brain.....will ask him help..!!
i was refraining from commenting!!! else there is nothing else to say more on the Klash...!! now i have to think more about ur Klash..!! :(
hahahahha.tht was a funny one..no you can repeat..i ll delete it from my brain fr the moment..hehehehhe
okay....everyone says......u learn nothing from ur mistakes..... for a change let me prove them wrong... :(
na no mistake-king in this...its ohk...abhi toh bahut dhamaka dhamaka post hoga klash pe...so you wont have to think much about atleast two posts, coz there are like 16 17 of us right...and wht is red ronins blog adress?
hmm.....sorry...my Firefox couldn't bear the enormity of so many Comments!!!
The Red Ronin: http://redronin.wordpress.com/
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