Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Oh! Rain Lift Me — Give Me Wings


And the day breaks the cotton wings of the Clouds,

And the sunlight triumphs upon darkness proud,

And the feet whisper to a wet swollen fresh ground,

And I device dry ways to sit on the bathed mound,

And I laugh, and chat, and remain through the day

As the silver sheet of shimmering petals fall this may


What freshness! What brightness!

What feeling — of excitement!

Lay in store among the dark alley,

Floating above; Me and Sally.

How clear is this sight serene!

Where oft did magic lay unseen.

For we found it a little too late,

Upon a stuffed mound,

Beside Sally's grave.


From above another tear falls and dies

Here with me—in memory—Sally cries

2 comments:

Jamaal Danish said...

gr8 work...indeed...

short, crisp (cotton clouds, wet swollen fresh ground) deep and painful (And I laugh, and chat, and remain through the day)...ths line lays down d foundations of pain felt by d protagonist later

ppl wn want to describe thngs lk 'death' they go so deep tht it starts lookin borin n junk...
but ths one well chosen words...

unlike my poems...

i can surely pick ths up for a research on writing short and deep and meaningful pieces...

n d pic above does the rest of tear-work...gud choice...

Jamaal Danish said...

hey cn i sugget another title for the poem...

A Date With Sally...