And the day breaks the cotton wings of the Clouds,
And the sunlight triumphs upon darkness proud,
And the feet whisper to a wet swollen fresh ground,
And I device dry ways to sit on the bathed mound,
And I laugh, and chat, and remain through the day
As the silver sheet of shimmering petals fall this may
What freshness! What brightness!
What feeling — of excitement!
Lay in store among the dark alley,
Floating above; Me and Sally.
How clear is this sight serene!
Where oft did magic lay unseen.
For we found it a little too late,
Upon a stuffed mound,
Beside Sally's grave.
From above another tear falls and dies
Here with me—in memory—Sally cries
2 comments:
gr8 work...indeed...
short, crisp (cotton clouds, wet swollen fresh ground) deep and painful (And I laugh, and chat, and remain through the day)...ths line lays down d foundations of pain felt by d protagonist later
ppl wn want to describe thngs lk 'death' they go so deep tht it starts lookin borin n junk...
but ths one well chosen words...
unlike my poems...
i can surely pick ths up for a research on writing short and deep and meaningful pieces...
n d pic above does the rest of tear-work...gud choice...
hey cn i sugget another title for the poem...
A Date With Sally...
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